'Audience essay feedback and learner response'
WWW: · You’ve written nearly 700 words and covered the three industries impressively – well done! · You’ve clearly picked out some key points from the lessons and notes such as streaming, piracy and audience consumption habits (‘binge watching’). · You’ve offered a conclusion that offers an opinion on the question. EBI: · You have focused more on audiences in this essay. That is absolutely fine but remember to consider the industry contexts too – who is making money? Is the industry struggling to survive? Is the quality of media content suffering due to these changes? · In an academic essay, try and avoid using subheadings and instead write excellent topic sentences – a clear sentence at the start of the paragraph that focuses on t...